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Couple of pointers - firstly, the ears - I don't know what you want from them but they look like they're just sort of stuck on. Perhaps a little more shading? Also if she's a fox perhaps they should be smaller and have more rounded tone.
Secondly, I think everything you don't like about it is fine! lol, but that's just me, I'm hopeless at people. The only thing I would say is that the bum doesn't look right. I like the curvy shading under the cheeks but for some reason (don't ask me why lol) it looks like her pants don't fit.
That is soooo much better than my pathetic attempts.
And I agree, the bum/pants bit is off... Not sure how I'd alter it though. Maybe the cheeks need to be higher up and more covered by the pants.
As to you not being a human drawer- no you never really were. You can, however whip me into hell with just about everything else. So don't start feeling down. You were always the better artist.
lol humans are hard. They don't have enough legs...I can't even begin to draw cartoons as well as you either, so I think we're even.
Mm, the greyscale shading is super, it's in all the right places. The suggestion they give is great, and that's what we're looking for here.
I don't personally think the hair makes the head look big - it just looks like she's got big hair (My own hair's nearly that long, and when it's out, I look like something from Noggin The Nog. It's a strange feeling).
I'll agree that the elbow is a little off... Inking is hard work, that's why I never do it.